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Wikipedia Entry of Imre Pozsgay

Wednesday, December 12th, 2007

I wrote my wikipedia entry about Imre Pozsgay due to the sheer fact that he was Hungarian and I myself have Hungarian roots. Also because he seemed like an interesting character and I couldn’t really find anything else to write about that someone else in the class or wikipedia had written about. Pozsgay was an important man in Hungarian history and a key player in maintaining Hungarian Democracy. He was born in Hungarian and was part of the Hungarian Socialist Workers Party, a group that played a major part in Hungary’s path to democracy. He was one of the first major figures to recognize that the revolution was a popular uprising and not a counterrevolution. Pozsgay joined the HSWP after he got a degree in English from the Lenin Institute in Budapest. His calls for reform lead to a falling out with the party’s leader Janos Kadar and in turn Moved Pozsgay to head the chairman position of the party’s mass organization, the Patriotic Front. Kadar was soon removed from his Minister of State position and Pozsgay took his place right after in 1988. The Hungarian Socialists Party (formally known as the HSWP) announced Pozsgay as their Deputy President. However in 1991 Pozsgay split off from the HSP to form his own party called the National Democratic Alliance.

My initial wikipedia entry was kind of weak and didn’t fit the protocol of wikipedia entries. However I must have picked a person that sparked some interests in certain people’s lives because corrections, new citations and information, and correct grammar were edited in my paper. Individuals wrote about information about Imre Pozsgay that I didn’t even know about. However the initial phase of my entry on Imre Pozsgay must have faded quickly, because after the first day no one attempted to edit my entry.

What I learned from writing my article on Imre Pozsgay for Wikipedia while basically anyone can write a wikipedia article is that it is a lot harder than it looks and there are guidelines that need to be met. Citations are also crucial in writing an article, all your information should be cited to let the reader know the information is real and the articles, books, and journals cited could maybe even excite the reader into reading more about the subject at hand. I would have never thought I could write an entry for wikipedia, but thanks to this class I proved to myself I can and did something I wouldn’t ordinarily do.

Presentation

Tuesday, December 4th, 2007

I think my presentation went okay but not great. I didn’t exceed the time limit and bore people, which was a good thing. I think I made my argument and the points of my paper very clear to the class and straight forward to the class. I know I am not a very good public speaker though but despite of this my presentation was still good. I wish I could have had a power point with pictures on it though, like that of the dwarfs the Orange Alternative use to draw or of some of the happenings that took place to give the class a better visual of what they group was like.

 

I didn’t like the fact that there wasn’t too much of a question answer session, in comparison to that of Ryan’s on the first day. However he had the whole class period for his presentation so I can’t really complain there. If there was more of one I think it could have helped me more. I don’t think I made clear about how my sources were very difficult to come by and how I needed some suggestions for where to get some more. I have primary sources but I need more, and I need secondary ones as well. Overall though I think that my presentation was very good and enlighten the class to the fact that there was more than one political group in Poland besides Solidarity. The presentation was a very good test to see whether or not my paper and the topic was an interesting idea.

Maps

Thursday, October 18th, 2007

The first map my group and I looked at was of Slovakia, Hungary, Poland, and Ukraine and it showed the villages of a certain group of people. I believe that the people first started out in 18oos near the bottom of Poland. When they started migrating outward they went more to the north and east rather than the west and south. They migrated all the way up to the top of Poland, into Ukraine, few went to Hungary and Yugoslavia, and many went up to Slovakia.

The second map my group and I looked at was the one of Kosovo. It seemed as if all the countries (Italy, France, Britian, United States, and Germany) had equal territory to cover and control but it was as if the British and the United States’ territories had more people and more commotion going on in their, so therefor they most likely had more responsibility.

The third map my group and I look at was the war effort in Yugoslavia in 1943. It seemed as if the enemies were beginning to invade and launching an attack on the southern part. The Yugoslavians seemed to have tried and launched a counterattack, but it wasn’t working. Much of the territory outside of country was already occupied by the enemy and they weren’t going to have a good chance at first.

Yugoslavia and Sources

Sunday, September 16th, 2007

The sources in Chapter Seven; The Devil’s Finger: The Disintegration of Yugoslavia were very extensive and varied. There were many books, articles, and speeches cited. Of the books and articles that were used the one thing I didn’t like was the fact that many of them were from the United States (several universities) and a few from other countries but not many from Yugoslavia, which I believed could have possibly caused a slight biased reaction. The speeches used in this chapter were from ordinary people as well as high ranking officials like Milosevic. The sources do a good job as well to show the ethnic division within Yugoslavia between the Serbian, Slovens, Croatians, and others because there are specific sources cited that state what ethnicity they are. Their was a variety of books and articles that were written after the Revolution and during it (many out of date ones and up to date) that I think they give a mixed perception of the time period and a biased opinion in a way since it is long after 1989. However the sources still gave a good outside perspective at how bad Yugoslavia was and then an even more descriptive description from a person within Yugoslavia. Overall, Stoke did a great job in finding his resources and the mix produces a well informed chapter.

Stokes Main Points

Sunday, September 16th, 2007

Stokes main point was I believe to describe to the reader how communism fell in Eastern Europe. It fell because the leaders of the countries could hold it together, the economic system didn’t make sense when compared to other countries, inflation caused problems, it was hard to keep the people under control so the military and secret police had become involved, just basically that communism couldn’t be held together. Gorbachev finally made people see that a change needed to occur and though he didn’t want to get rid of communism he did in Russia and other communist countries in Eastern Europe followed. The important thing to remember is that Gorbie really didn’t want to get rid of communism it was just a mistake the public made and he went with it because of the public and his policies swayed that way.

Other more detailed points Stokes made was that the secret police were out of control and no one could be trusted and neither could the military. In Romania it was the worst and they spiraled out of control for a little. Yugoslavia was just a mess, but one thing that wasn’t made clear to me was how they winded up, good or bad. East Germany had it the best out of all the communist nations during that time when they decided to become democratic due to West Germany’s help. Also that Solidarity in Poland was seen as a bad thing at first but in the end helped out the country immensely. What is learned through this book is that though these Eastern European countries started out communist and ended democratic the trip there wasn’t a smooth one.

Wikipedia entry

Sunday, September 16th, 2007

Hey everyone,

I wrote my Wikipedia entry on Imre Pozsgay on September 11. Check it out!

Stokes Part 1

Thursday, September 13th, 2007

After reading the first part of Stokes’ book I realized that communism was a total failure in Easter Europe and it was doing nothing but hurt its own people. Poland had a rough time with Solidarity, getting its people food, and giving its people the self respect and dignity that they deserved. Solidarity helped the Polish people and it seemed as if the government could never get away from it and ultimately had to accept it.

All the citizens in Romania despised their country, and so did the rest of Europe. Its political leaders and secret police were out of control and citizens feared for their lives. The secret police wasn’t just a problem in Romania but in numerous other Eastern European countries as well. Hungary fought hard for its democracy and eventually won it and completely eliminated communism like the other Eastern European countries.

East Germany had a huge leg up when compared to the other Eastern European countries trying to get away from communism. Its transition to democracy went relatively smoothly and so did its economic life. Why? Mainly because West Germany helped them out immensly.

After reading the first part of Stokes’s book I came to the conclusion that Gorbie was the main player in getting the Eastern European nations to rethink their governmen. Although Gorbie didn’t want to due away with communism completely, he accidently did and his policies helped create a great government in Russia. Everyone around the world loved him and gave him multitudes of respect.

Yugoslavia

Thursday, September 13th, 2007

The Yugoslavia situation was unlike any other situation in any other Eastern European country during this time. The book spoke of how it was if God picked Yugoslavia out of every country in the world and decided that everything that could go wrong would go wrong in this country. There was turmoil going on all around the country, but it didn’t compare to the turmoil within the country.

It seemed as if the Serbs, Slovens, and Croatians would never get along no matter what anybody did including if a new government was established. Finally after a long period of time and hard work six new governments were formed within Yugoslavia, however these governments clashed and some of their political leaders were questionable. It seems to me that while elections were suppose to be free ones not all of them were. Also the Macedonians were pretty much forgotten during this time period and there after. Although Yugoslavia was on the right path away from communism it was still hitting plenty of bumps in the road on the way to the finish line.